On a cold night she ran away
She could not bear to stand another day
You told her lies, you caused her pain
You made her wander alone in the rain
You made her cry, you made her feel small
Now you're the one who has to pay for all
Now you wish you could take it all back
Take the worst memories to send away in a sack
But it's much to late now
There's nothing more you can do
Just one thing left to say
She stopped loving you
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Tuesday, January 25, 2011
Friday, January 14, 2011
Poem on an important moment
Cayla
It was just yesterday when I saw you
Your brown eyes and brown curls
You were fine, you were okay
You were laughing
Nothing seemed wrong
It was a summer day
When you left and never came back
You went to a better place
I still remember you
I always will
It was just yesterday when I saw you
It was just yesterday when I saw you
Your brown eyes and brown curls
You were fine, you were okay
You were laughing
Nothing seemed wrong
It was a summer day
When you left and never came back
You went to a better place
I still remember you
I always will
It was just yesterday when I saw you
Wednesday, January 12, 2011
Poem based off of a photo
(Poem is based off of the painting, Venice Twilight, painted by, Claude Monet)
Let us melt under the remaining rays of the sun
Let the thoughts and worries blow away with the wind
Hand in hand we will leave
We will be part of the sky
Part of the colors
Part of the beauty
Tuesday, January 11, 2011
The Starry Night Response
When I first read the poem, I though that it should have been the caption of the painting. It was describing everything in Vincent Van Gogh's painting. From the tree all the way to the wind. When I reread it, I saw it through a different lens. It was no longer a caption, it was a poem written through her eyes. Everything she felt at that moment went to her pen which then went onto paper. Her poem was filled with many things that include metaphors and figurative language.( It even left you with many questions.) I wonder why she wrote her poem the way she did. Was it meant to sound as creepy as it did? Was it her suicide letter? or did she simply see the night sky as beautiful?
Overall, I found this poem really interesting. It was mysterious and it left me thinking. (It was a poem like no other, it was unique.) I never really though about the the might sky and I liked how it went deep into the topic. Anne was able to show her emotions and feelings through her poem and I wonder if my class and I got the message she tried to give the readers.
Overall, I found this poem really interesting. It was mysterious and it left me thinking. (It was a poem like no other, it was unique.) I never really though about the the might sky and I liked how it went deep into the topic. Anne was able to show her emotions and feelings through her poem and I wonder if my class and I got the message she tried to give the readers.
Friday, January 7, 2011
Painting Analysis
Jusko, Donald. PAINTING ON LOCATION FINE ART TEACHING GALLERY V. 10 Dec. 2006. 7 Jan. 2011 http://realcolorwheel.com/78.htm.
Observations: The painting is made up of very bright colors. There are flowers, trees, and grass in the background. The flowers are the the things that stand out in the painting. There is a peacock in the corner of the picture. It's feathers are camouflaged with the rest of the flowers. There is not much going on behind the tree. There are a few details scattered here and there such as the grass.
Inferences: The bright colors may symbolize beauty or creativity. Since there is not much in the background the main attention are the bright colored flowers and the peacock.The peacock and flowers are brightly colored, does that symbolize importance? The details in the background are simple compared to the foreground.
Interpretation: According to feng-shui, “Peacocks are a symbol of beauty reminding us to take pleasure in the finer things in life. The artist Donald D. Jusko probably thought that Maui Hawaii was also a thing of beauty. (From pictures on the Internet also think it's beautiful.) Flowers and the peacock are just the his way of saying it.
December Reading Challenge
The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton
If you were to ask me whether the movie was better or the book, I would definitely say the book. In my opinion, the movie was based off another book, not The Outsiders I read. It was I who complained that the movie was ruining the book this time around rather than my one of my sisters. Characters, appearances and many other things were changed. I could not believe it!
Before I saw the movie I had a sense of what the actors would look like, but my predictions were not correct.When I thought of the Socs, I thought of rich, nice shirts, and tough looking. They got the rich and nice shirt part right ,but they did not look tough. The same thing happened with the Greasers. The gang did look tough, but they were missing their long, silky, and greasy hair. In the book, it said:
"Our hair was tuff- we didn't have to use much grease on it. Our hair labeled us greasers, too- it was our trademark. The one thing we were proud of. Maybe we couldn't have Corvairs or madras shirts, but we could have hair." (71)
I wonder why they couldn't add this important detail in the movie. There is one thing I appreciate about the movie. They did not take away the special connection between Soda and Pony. There were so many aw moment in the book and the movie. I glad the filmmakers didn't change that.
Overall, the movie wasn't the worst, but it disappointed me.
The Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold
When books are turned into movies, things are changed, removed, and added in, so when The Lovely Bones became a movie it wasn't much of a surprise. Filmmakers this time around did a very good job. All the actors chosen fit the characters in the book. Mr. Harvey even gave me the skeevies!
The reason I think it all worked out well is because Saoirse Ronan (Susie) connected so well with the actors. The special connection between Susie and her father was so believable. When she was in the underground room with Mr. Harvey your heart was beating so fast that you wondered if you were in the room instead. When she was annoyed at her mother for making her wear the knitted hat, it was such a mother-daughter thing. I wonder how the movie would've turned out if they did not choose these actors.
While watching the movie I had a few complaints, but by the end I forgot all about them. The book wasn't really messed with, which is a good thing. Overall, the movie was really great. If you enjoyed the book then you will love the movie. It might even leave you crying!
If you were to ask me whether the movie was better or the book, I would definitely say the book. In my opinion, the movie was based off another book, not The Outsiders I read. It was I who complained that the movie was ruining the book this time around rather than my one of my sisters. Characters, appearances and many other things were changed. I could not believe it!
Before I saw the movie I had a sense of what the actors would look like, but my predictions were not correct.When I thought of the Socs, I thought of rich, nice shirts, and tough looking. They got the rich and nice shirt part right ,but they did not look tough. The same thing happened with the Greasers. The gang did look tough, but they were missing their long, silky, and greasy hair. In the book, it said:
"Our hair was tuff- we didn't have to use much grease on it. Our hair labeled us greasers, too- it was our trademark. The one thing we were proud of. Maybe we couldn't have Corvairs or madras shirts, but we could have hair." (71)
I wonder why they couldn't add this important detail in the movie. There is one thing I appreciate about the movie. They did not take away the special connection between Soda and Pony. There were so many aw moment in the book and the movie. I glad the filmmakers didn't change that.
Overall, the movie wasn't the worst, but it disappointed me.
The Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold
When books are turned into movies, things are changed, removed, and added in, so when The Lovely Bones became a movie it wasn't much of a surprise. Filmmakers this time around did a very good job. All the actors chosen fit the characters in the book. Mr. Harvey even gave me the skeevies!
The reason I think it all worked out well is because Saoirse Ronan (Susie) connected so well with the actors. The special connection between Susie and her father was so believable. When she was in the underground room with Mr. Harvey your heart was beating so fast that you wondered if you were in the room instead. When she was annoyed at her mother for making her wear the knitted hat, it was such a mother-daughter thing. I wonder how the movie would've turned out if they did not choose these actors.
While watching the movie I had a few complaints, but by the end I forgot all about them. The book wasn't really messed with, which is a good thing. Overall, the movie was really great. If you enjoyed the book then you will love the movie. It might even leave you crying!
Saturday, December 11, 2010
Authors Note (Draft)
Every year in American, millions of teenagers run away. A teen will usually run away after having an argument with their mom or dad.They often do not have a solid plan as to where to go because they are in rage at the moment. Teenage runaways do not realize the dangers that they can get into. A few do not wish to get involved with burglary, drugs, or alcohol but they end up doing it. ("Teenage Runaways," page 1.) Most teens return after two days to two weeks, and the others end up on the streets. ("Teen Runaways", page 1.)
It was no more than a year ago when Maria's mom called to ask if Vanessa knew anything. The first thing that popped into my head was that she had run away. After hanging up, Vanessa told me that Maria had run away and they didn't know where she was. She told me her mother was crying that she could hardly understand what she was saying. Later that same day, Maria came home with her mother waiting by the door. You can say that this story grew out of that experience, but it is fiction.
Maria learned, you don't know what you've got until it's gone.
It was no more than a year ago when Maria's mom called to ask if Vanessa knew anything. The first thing that popped into my head was that she had run away. After hanging up, Vanessa told me that Maria had run away and they didn't know where she was. She told me her mother was crying that she could hardly understand what she was saying. Later that same day, Maria came home with her mother waiting by the door. You can say that this story grew out of that experience, but it is fiction.
Maria learned, you don't know what you've got until it's gone.
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