(Poem is based off of the painting, Venice Twilight, painted by, Claude Monet)
Let us melt under the remaining rays of the sun
Let the thoughts and worries blow away with the wind
Hand in hand we will leave
We will be part of the sky
Part of the colors
Part of the beauty
Beautiful job! This poem is so simple and short yet at the same time seems to mean a lot more than it tells. Your words paint a beautiful image in my mind, and I like how we don't really know who you are talking to. Great poem!
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